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    The Meeting
       
        You’re wondering through some kind of wood, starving and tired, when you see a cave and coming from the cave is the amazing aroma of pizza. Curious (and of course hungry) you wonder into the cave to find a blond, crazy looking girl in her early teens, sitting on a couch in a completely furnished room. “Oh, Hia! I’m Joanna, I live here…you look hungry want some pizza?” she points to the pizza sitting in front of her. As she fetches you a plate you ask “Do you live here alone?”
“Oh, no! Of course not. I live here with my…umm…family milenne, Jubby, and Princess! mlienee’s the quiet one, Jubby the tomboy (I know the name’s not the best) and Princess the spoiled girly girl T__T. Now …”she says in a completely calm, business like voice.
“I know you’re here for something…the lease…the taxes WHAT?” confused and baffled you ask “What?”
“Oh, your not here for that…I apologize. I’ve been having some finical trouble lately…”
“JOAAAAAAAAAAANNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!JUBBY TORE MY *sniff*JERAN POSTER!!!!”a beautiful blue wolf creature wines
“T_T’ ok, ok Princess…..JUBBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! While I go take care of this milenee will keep you company….MILENEE, COME KEEP OUR GUEST COMPANY!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
As soon as this “Joanna” leaves a beautiful blue female Chipmunk-like-creature walks in and turning into her semi-human form sit on the couch by you, a huge golden earring dangles form her right ear matching her eyes as if they were made of gold themselves.
“I’m milenne….you’re [insert name here]” she says barely even looking at you.
“HOW’D YOU KNOW THAT?!?!?!?” you ask startled
“My “gift” as Joanna calls it. It’s really a curse…but you don’t want to know about that…do you?” she replies in an almost depressed voice.
“yes, yes, yes I do” you say so eager to hear her story you are completely oblivious to the sadness in her voice.
“Ok, well then…sit back and relax this might take a while…”

The Story

        I was a playful kit in southern Shenku…not much of anything hanging out with the other kits my age, roughhousing and fooling around. I was obviously born to a normal mum and dad (though I have no idea were they are now). I went through life as normal as any other girlF in the village, little did I know my story was about to start…
        “MUM!!!!! I DON’T WANT TO GO HUNTING!!!!!!!!” I bellowed
“You know as well as I that it is our duty as the women to go hunting, and in time you’ll take my place and-”
“-and become the lead hunter…I know, I know. I don’t want to hunt though. It’s boring.” It was the day after my 12th birthday, the day I was supposed to learn to hunt.
“It just takes patients that’s all.” my mum smiled “which you don’t have any.”
“so why can’t you send Kilee? She’s old enough!” Kilee is…was my 14 year old sister.
“Because it’s YOUR turn to learn to hunt, Kilee already knows how…but she can come along if you like?”
“Okay, fine I’ll go if she goes with me” I finally said agreeing to my mum’s offer.
“Now get your things and get ready, we’ll be leaving soon.”
As I went to my room my get my stuff I stopped by my dad’s den (his office) “Hi, baby girl!” he said putting down the piece of wood he was working on (he was a toy maker). “You ready for the big hunt yet?”
“Almost” I said in an obviously worried voice.
“You worried?”
“Kinda”
“I remember your mom’s first hunt…She was a wreck. Of course she won’t tell you that though, she’s just like that”
“I love you daddy” I said as I through my arms around him, my dad and I had a strong bond and I couldn’t go a week or two without talking to him. “It’ll be ok…trust me” his voice comforting said.
“Ok” I struggled to say.
“Well, go get ready then go down to you mother, don’t wanna keep her waiting!” he said in a “better hurry” voice.
“Yes daddy” I said letting go of him.
As I got ready I remembered the list my mum gave me. This is it*hands you an old piece of rice paper* It reads:

- 1 change of clothes
- 6 packs of food
- a lighter
- matches
- a compass
- $500 (never know)
- kindling
- bandages
- 1 sleeping bag
- 1 canteen
- best bow & 50 arrows
- faith

“Faith?” you ask baffled
“Look at the very bottom [insert name here]” she replies

Sure enough at the bottom, in small print it says:
Faith is a magic powerful enough to destroy all evil. Keep faith.

“THAT’S USFUL!” I said confused (Later on I understood what it meant)
   Once I got all these things I headed downstairs in my village’s hunter’s costume. “Oh, honey you look lovely!!! So strong and proud” my mum was so proud (after all hunting was her life!).
“But this dress is so short…”
“You’ll get used to it. In the meantime have this egg rap you’ll need the energy and drink this smoothie…as a treat. Once your done go to meet the others and me in Central Park we’ll start the Opening Season parade from there.” As she left I felt my heart sink. Not only do I hate parades but I DISPISE being in them!!!
I did as my mum told me and left for Central park. On my way there I was SOOOOOOOOOOOOO embarrassed!!! The dress was so short I couldn’t stand it, then there was the parade…Oh, how I didn’t want to go especially in this dress. On my way there I saw my friend Kole hanging out with all his friends. He was sweet…a tad immature which is why I had hoped not to see him.
“MILENEE!!!!” he yelled. THAT was the last thing I wanted him to do.
“H-h-hi Kole…Jeremy, Greg, Gorge, Jonathan” Oh, THAT WAS IT!!!I actually liked Kole!!!!! and he was with his friends!!! I wanted to vanish!!!
“You look AMAZING!!! So getting ready for the hunt, huh?”
“Actually I’m going to the parade…are you guys going?”
“HECK YA!!!! We wouldn’t miss it for the world, would we?” They all agreed, by now I was beat red!
“What is it Milly?” Now I noticed something…Oh, that SOMETHING!!!! I ran and fell flat on my face after the first three steps! My dress flew up and landed on my back exposing my underwear! As they laughed I knelt on my knees and cried! After what seemed like forever of teasing I got up, pulled an arrow out of the little sack on my thigh, lifted my bow, prepared to aim and shot the arrow right over Kole’s head!!!! Everyone was still as five strands of hair fell from his head (the ones the arrow had chopped off), no blood though. Kole went pale as I fetched the arrow and walked away looking so cool X^).
Once I got there I was shocked to see so many women in dresses like mine, now I felt a little better (not much).
“MUM, OVER HERE!!!” I yelled
“Milmil…go get your sister by the float over there! Ok?”
“Ok!”
“Hey baby sis!” Kilee sounded so excited. “You’ll LOVE hunting I promise!”
“Yeah, well I ain’t too thrilled about it now.” I smiled.
“Don’t worry all that will go away soon enough.”
“Well mum wants us so let’s go.”
I’ll skip the parade after all; all that happened was waving and cheering…BORRRRRRRRRING!
Once hiking and riding uniback we set up camp and slept. “MIL! Come here.” I recognized the voice to be Sarala’s, the Village’s hunting leader. “Go hunting with your mother and sister for breakfast.”
“Ya, sure...” I was still a little groggy (after all it was 4:00 AM)
Turns out my Mum and Kilee were waiting for me. “Ok Mil, now well go to the forest near by and catch a Peadackle from the pond in there. Now just stay away from that mystical shrine…It’s cursed…mil…MIL!!! Were you listening?” I wasn’t…I fell asleep standing up.
“Yeah, mum, I was.”
“Good…Kilee go with your sister and help her, I gotta go get a fire going.” WRONG THING TO DO!! If my mum had gone with…no one would’ve gotten hurt.
“Ok now…aim directly below the fish and fire…got it?”
“Got it.”
“No sudden movements either.” I fired and surprisingly nailed it!
“Yeah! Now do the same thing again. Ok?”
“Ok.” I did, again and again and again and again till we had enough Peadackle to feed an army!
“Ok Mil now let me get some.” My sister laughed. “Go have a look around for a while, ok? Kill a Mallard or two while you’re at it.”
“Zokey, sis!” I laughed.
Before long I came crossed a shrine, curious I reached my hand inside and pulled out an earring a HUGE earring, Gold and gleaming in the bits of light that were shining through the trees that covered the forest. It was SO BEAUTIFUL! I had to try it on!
“MIL! NO!” my sister yelled. Too late. It was on, and I fell to the ground.
“MILLY!” My sister ran over and put my head in her lap. “no.”
Just then a light came from my eyes, a red light. It burst up and into the sky. The earring, OH, THE PAIN! I felt like it was burning my ear!
“RRRRRAAAAAAAGGGGGGHHH” My sister…MY SISTER WAS BEING CONSUMED BY THE LIGHT!
“KILEE!”
“Milen…”
“NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!”KILEE, KILEE ANSWER ME!!!” There was no answer…she was gone…gone. “KILEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! …Kilee…”
   I stayed there grieving for a long time which that cursed earring still on. “STUPID EARRING!” I yelled and reached to take it off. “OW!!” It burned my finger…I couldn’t take it off.
“milly!!” It was my mum, my mum.
    “WHAT?!?!MIENEE!!!!WHAT HAPPENED?!?!?!”
    “MUUUUUUM!” Then she knew, Knew everything that had happened, and cried.
    “mum…I didn’t mea-“
    “I TOLD YOU NOT TO!!!!! I told you not to. WHAT IN FYORA’S NAME WERE YOU THINKING?!?!?!?!”
“I-i-i wasn’t…”
“YOU WEREN’T!!!!!!!” Her voice I can’t describe the tone of it. “Get to the camp…NOW!!!!”

****
       
       As the village leaders were having a meeting about what to do with “The Cursed One” I sat in a cage all in rags not knowing barley living.
“Then it’s decided she shall be banished and no longer able to be thought of as a living thing but an inanimate object to our people.” In other words I can’t spell my name with a capital letter.
I was banished but before I left Kole came in to see me. “milenee…” He was freighted by the earring that looked as if it was going to tear my ear off.
“KOLE!” I cried “Kole”
“Oh, milenee” he wrapped his arms around me. “milly…why?”
“I didn’t know.” I sobbed “I really like you…”
“…mil, I-I’m so sorry for teasing you and…well…yeah…but I did that because I kinda like you too”
That was it. I sobbed and sobbed on his shoulder and I swear I could see tears coming from his eyes too.
“ENOUGH!!!!!! LEAVE NOW!!” The guard barked at Kole.
“mil?”
“y-yes?”
“Never forget me…never forget this.” He-he kissed me.

****
5 Years After The Banishment

Banishment Profile #0204578583
Name: Milenee Spectrum
Age at banishment: 12 years and 3 days
Family: Tenna(mom), Mark(dad), Kilee(sister; dead)
Age now(if still alive): 17
Reason for banishment: Cursed
Extended Punishment: known as an inanimate object (can not use capitals in her name)
Banished to: Lost Dessert
Never again to come to: Shenku

       “GET HER!!!”
“THIEF!!!THIEF!!!!”
       These were the voices I heard for the next 5 years. I was a thief to survive…and not too proud of it. To me “thief” means stealer of hope. I was “thieved” of my OWN hope in my eyes. I was also nicknamed “The Gold Ear Shadow Bandit” …Not A good name T_____T. At all.
       “GET HER!!!!!”
       “YOUR GOING DOWN GOLDE-” I stunned them with a glance of my red eyes. As I now must tell you my earring has some kind of power over my eyes...and when I put the earring on it turned my eyes the same gold color gold as it. When I got mad or scared it was like the earring knew and turned a glowing red along with my eyes, THAT stunned people and made them freeze in there steps.
        “UMMMFFF!” I had to jump up a series of ledges before I got to my resting place. The food I had stolen this time was a succulent, juicy, ripe pear. A gourmet meal in my eyes. But as I bit into it I heard something.
       A GUARD!!! My trick didn’t work on all of them. Then out of nowhere an odd looking, blond human girl in her early teens jumped out and in her hand was the longest sword I’d ever seen!
        “Don’t even think about it!” She spat at the guard who was ready to kill me. She swung the sword with 100% accuracy and at high speed.
        “YOW!!!!” The guard was cut, not bad but just enough where he needed to retreat.
       “Come on, we need to leave now. I’ll tell you more bout’ myself on the way.” That was all she said to me until we got here.
       She turned to me, smiled and said “I’m Joanna. Would you like to live with me?”
       “Yes.”
       
    THE END!
       
       
“Well now you know.” As the creature got up and left, leaving you feeling dumbfounded Joanna walks back in.
“NOW, NO MORE JUBBY!!!! …So she told you her story huh? Well yeah, It’s a sad one. Now here’s a map to help you get to the nearest ranger’s station. GOOD DAY AND GOD SPEED TO YOU!!!” As you leave you remember…

“Faith is a magic powerful enough to destroy all evil. Keep faith.”
   ~ milenee
AS PROMISED!!!!TADAAAAA!!!!!!!!:p this is my first story EVER written!!!!So yeah, it's kinda (Holy) crapy...LOLZ!!!! NOES TO FAMIN!!!!!!!!!!!

BTW!!!!milly here will now be making sarcastic comments to my comments...milly?
milenee: ...Your so weird...
Me: :glomp: AWWWWWW!!!!!THANKS!!!!!:hug:
milenee: ...
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